LONG-THOUGHT WEAKNESSES:

A branchéd stream off high;
flowing
A whirlpool grips ‘til nigh;
reaching
A peachéd land long shy;
rolling
A fruitful bearer, fly;
curving
A grippéd hand shan’t pry;
holding
A pulse with which I lie;
growing

This is a re-write of Weaknesses:.
The first version was too simple; I find this one more intrinsic.

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